Reviews For: A Lemon Cure? - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

ReviewerDateChapterType
  2002-08-25 1 Anonymous
hahhah...wat a funy yet beautiful story..thanks for writing.
Calophi 2002-08-02 1Signed
I love how your sex scenes aren't all...well, sex. I like how you make them humorous as well and add a bit of storyline into it. ^_^
Dark Fairy 2002-07-22 1Signed
OK! interesting. Very funny too. *giggles*
Me   2002-06-17 1 Anonymous
LOL!!! That was funny! I love the comments (Zelgadis-san! Your pebbles rub me just the right way!) and they were in char, which was great. :P Hehehehe!
Dark fire angel 2002-05-04 1Signed
*Strugles to keep up her 'Dark' angel facade... but can't and ends up rolling on the floor with a huge fit of laughter* Ha! Ha! Ha!!! Funny! I can't believe you made poor Zelly go through all of that *thinks back to the fic* Not that minded that much, ne?
ShuraChan 2002-04-20 1Signed
I can't say I didn't laugh my ass off at this... And dumb little Amelia... HAHAHA!! Princess Psycho at her best! I could definitely read this twice!
juju (juju_ben@sluggy.net)  2002-02-14 1 Anonymous
Very very cute... not to mention more in character than the vast majority of lemons I've seen. I like.
Pippin   2002-02-13 1 Anonymous
Verry Verry Verry funny.
Ice-Princess-Amber 2002-01-29 1Signed
That was absolutely hilarious! You managed to capture Amelia's character perfectly. I hope you write another fic!
Crono 2002-01-27 1Signed
that was...unexpected.
libra-gurl 2002-01-14 1Signed
Wai! That's so funny...
Warrior Scorpio   2002-01-12 1 Anonymous
LOLOL OH NO!!! This story is THE funniest thing I've ever read!! I was cracking up every second of it. *when uh...I was preoccupied with the plot ^_^;;* It's just - Perfect. This is the perfect story for any Zel/Ame fan - Heck even if you're not, you'll get a laugh or two out. I LOVE THIS!! I WANT SEQUEL!!!
Myok 2002-01-07 1Signed
Very enjoyable story, like a chapter out of a romance novel. The level of detail was just right, and Zel and Amelia were just so gosh darn kawaii I was laughing out loud.
imbrii (silverain@fuse.net)  2002-01-03 1 Anonymous
very good. hilarious, pretty much entirely in character... GREAT!
the only problem is that it's very obvious it used to be an RP. Inconsistent spellings of Zelgadiss, repeating a lot of words, mized up tenses... The usual
Fix that, and you'll have a VERY good fanfic. It just needs an edit, and a thesaurus, and a bit more consistency.
I look forward to the edit! (I liked this fic so much I saved it on my computer... I can't wait to see it get even better!)
BigRed (pjshanno@yahoo.com)  2002-01-01 1 Anonymous
That was very entertaining. Funny and erotic at the same time. I also thought that it was very in character for them. I can see Amelia and Zelgadis behaving this way in that situation.